Purple_Burnt_Squirre
08-09-2004, 11:44 AM
A rabbit frolics
In a classic scene
That may be real
Hidden quality
Behind Jess's eyes
The bellbirds gather
For a noon chorus
To the soft background
Of a trickling stream
While field mice
Harvest strawberrys
Near flowing meadows
Of wild flowers
Jess is a someone who is seen by many guys as an object so when talking to us is very reserved distant and only uses closed sentances when spoken to but the girls speak of her warmth and kindness and I wanted to write a poem that reflects what I don't see that may be there in a classic sort of way trouble is I'm not sure where to take or how it should be finsished, any ideas thoughts would be very much appreciated :)
In a classic scene
That may be real
Hidden quality
Behind Jess's eyes
The bellbirds gather
For a noon chorus
To the soft background
Of a trickling stream
While field mice
Harvest strawberrys
Near flowing meadows
Of wild flowers
Jess is a someone who is seen by many guys as an object so when talking to us is very reserved distant and only uses closed sentances when spoken to but the girls speak of her warmth and kindness and I wanted to write a poem that reflects what I don't see that may be there in a classic sort of way trouble is I'm not sure where to take or how it should be finsished, any ideas thoughts would be very much appreciated :)