Mist

[bobdylan08]

I am the destitute mist

Abandoned and subdued

Silently creeping by the far corners

Wrapping my broken fingers

Against the ethereal chimes

Breeding crippled silences

That tore through the night

I am a muse

Riding on crooked stilts

With morning trailing behind me.

[bobdylan08]

sight into mind.

i awoke
unto the gentle arms of the dawn
and i watched in silence
lying resignedly under a pale, blue sky.
a lonely cloud.
drifting.lazily across the [sun.rise]

[bobdylan08]

Crystal Moon
Flying
Th Divine Nightlight

Gliding, Guiding the stars to draw night's soft veil

Oh, dissipated sky, draw the stars near
Let them drift to new horizons

And when the light fades away
And only darkness and iniquity remain
Only then can you see the stars shine.

[bobdylan08]

Take me down

to the riverside,
where ashen moths dance
and lotus flowers glide
that never die.

I graze my hand
over the crimson flower

and the red rose screams
with silent fury.

And my tears fall
with the gentle drift
of sharp, peircing dew
sliding off the rose petals.

please reply to these. comments and criticisms are appreciated.

[Poem~Girl]

very nicely written

[bobdylan08]

thanks :)