lost, somewhere

[VanAstral]

Morning came leisurely and bright
Management had no complaints…
Wonder whose tent this is

Ice cream and pizza, fruit unbeknownst to me,
Good morning, eye candy,
harmony, all feelings relieved

phone hasn’t rung since two thousand one
flushed it down the plane’s toilet, over the Pacific,
wonder if it’s reached bottom

Up on a mountain, down on a beach, wet in a rainforest,
nothing in the desert, baby, ‘cept you and me
Do I hear you humming What a wonderful world?

fly, float, walk, hitch, never stop, this way and that,
strength in youth, valiant errant knights
people who are bored are boring people

nation station, keep spinning the dial
girls, all sorts of colours… God damn
I see the lines where the sun don’t shine

[lucyinthesky]

this rocks. i like it a lot. when i first started reading it, it sounded cliche, but then it got really good. :) sweeeeet.

[fulmah]

Up on a mountain, down on a beach, wet in a rainforest,
nothing in the desert, baby, ‘cept you and me
Do I hear you humming What a wonderful world?
I liked this section right here mucho.

Some of the words in a few spots seem to clash, and oddly enough it works. You've got some really good flow going on here, and your voice comes through loud and clear. Good stuff!