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stonedimmaculate
01-30-2007, 12:28 AM
Staring vacantly through dim eyes,

Living through a cold despair,

No one hears her internal cries,

Does anyone even care?



Crisp is her smile,

Crunching under passers’ feet,

Simply an innocent child,

No one knows how deep



Release is a razor blade,

Radiant upon her bed,

So brave, but quite afraid,

Of these scars that show she’s bled



Keeping closed her little world,

Letting no one in,

In need of nothing money can afford,

Only the words of a friend



Her heart so heavy,

With love for all but herself,

Her tears break her eye’s levee,

Praying for the people on her shelf



No one knows what’s swirling,

In that mind she has,

While other girls are twirling,

On the playful grass



For this girl I ponder,

Think with all my might,

For this girl I wonder,

Will she be alright?

DelxPez
01-30-2007, 02:43 AM
nice, i like it!

20th_centry_fox
01-31-2007, 04:01 AM
One of the best poems I've seen in a while. keep up the good work :spliff:

TheLizardKingMike
01-31-2007, 11:53 PM
Awesome man, that was very good. It seems pretty complete, which is hard for me to do sometimes. Take it easy.