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CrucifiedDreams
01-30-2007, 12:12 AM
Call it uncertainty
Call it a choice without reflection
Call it spontaneity
Call it hunger
Or passion
Or maybe love
Call it self-determination
Call it warm hands on a cold night
Call it a bitter tease
Call it incrimination

Take your left hand
Place it over your heart
Call that feeling aspiration
Take the chemicals bubbling through your nervous system
Call that feeling chemistry
Take the past surging through your brain
Wrapped around your spinal cord
Call that feeling a flash back
Take the bottle and position it downward
Call that feeling free at last
Free at last

Take the last leap
Call it faith
Call it spontaneity
Call it a choice without reflection
Call it uncertainty
Or just maybe
You can call it

Precision

unknown2012
01-30-2007, 05:47 AM
ooo i like it lots :) made me think about love and also addictions. wow lol it made me think about alot of things.. very very nice job :)

what were you mostly thinking about when you wrote it?

Radiation
01-30-2007, 06:28 AM
Obviously you are much better with words than I am, so I'll just say...very nice.

natural philosophy
01-30-2007, 04:51 PM
great visual imagery. References to the brain, nervous system, spinal cord, etc. also made me think of an addiction, but it also made me think of lost love. 'warm hands on a cold night' or 'a choice without reflection' are good images of love.

CrucifiedDreams
01-31-2007, 02:07 AM
Thanks guys :)

I was thinking about love and addiction. You got it.