Save Me

[Faerie Jane]

I waited for you to come

Like a lover in the night

To rescue me from pain

To make everything alright.



You, the only thing

That could sooth my soul

And comfort my heart

When life took it's toll



You turned your back

You pushed me around

Taunted and teased

Then let me down



Waiting for you with open arms

Begged you to seize me

You laughed in my face

And wouldn't appease me



Oh sweet angel of death

Show me some grace

Please don't turn your back

Save me from this place

[GirlInTheGreenGrass]

"Angel of death...save me from this place"... so bittersweet. Are you speaking of this angel throughout the entire poem? well, anyway, I love this. You're words could easily be a catchy song. Thank you, friend.

[oldwolf]

Ahh my sweet friend
I sat beside you and held you close
And told you of so much else
But your expectations blinded you anon

I told you of your opportunities to Grow
But you instead would rather throw -
Blessings and Reverence are the Way
And I know you know this, yet still are swayed away
By not facing and confronting and being true
And finding within that O so Sweet Self
That Being of purity and light

For then you need me no more
In joining your own you have become One
And are no longer separated from the Change you call for
For death is Change
And here I be, Calling to you unheard.

So my hand still is open to both hold and let go
Come Be Still and Know and go within
For Inside you my dear is more than could be desired
And herein is your own one true love
So turn not away and your own Self save

[DroopySnoopy]

Just beautiful. It has so much heart. And sorrow, just dripping throughout.

[Faerie Jane]

"Angel of death...save me from this place"... so bittersweet. Are you speaking of this angel throughout the entire poem? well, anyway, I love this. You're words could easily be a catchy song. Thank you, friend.
Thank you my dear. Yes, I am speaking about the angel of death throughout this piece

[Faerie Jane]

So my hand still is open to both hold and let go
Come Be Still and Know and go within
For Inside you my dear is more than could be desired
And herein is your own one true love
So turn not away and your own Self save

Oldwolf, your poem is beautiful. This stanza is awesome.

[Faerie Jane]

Just beautiful. It has so much heart. And sorrow, just dripping throughout.
Thank you DS

[athena_skye]

I liked it....not alot of grammatical errors. It gets under my skin when someone writes something that just doesn't flow right and I gotta think about what point they were trying to make. I also can't stand it when there are so many typos the reader is all, "so, is this even ENGLISH??" Your poem was easy to read, and a pleasure to read....like to hear more from ya sometime :)