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myself
11-19-2006, 10:07 AM
I’m chasing the clouds

Trying to hunt them

To shoot through these moving illusions

Sometimes only chasing air

Being left with nothing

The soft illusion having slid away




They float above me

Gliding gently or speeding by

Dispersing when I try to shoot

Disappearing like any illusion

When you try to touch it




I am chasing illusions

Running below them

Watching them sail away

Escaping my control

Galloping above my eyes

Beyond my shooting

Beyond my touch

Beyond my reach

Leaving me behind

6469
05-06-2007, 05:30 AM
Thats a pretty cool poem!

myself
05-06-2007, 05:41 PM
thanks :)

Miss_Beatle
05-06-2007, 08:00 PM
Oh I love it! Great job! :)