welcome to life

[teh-horace]

welcome to this life
your life
not his life or her life
your being
you're being
hearing, seeing
words and feelings
have no meaning
other than your meaning
your life, your words
your faith
you're heard
a spirit, a soul
no void, no hole
fill it up, fill your bowl
grain of rice or grain of sand
human being, human man
woman, child, stages and steps
one, two, three
imagined percepts
perceptions, prescriptions
emotions, restrictions
words and meanings
life, fleeting?
at a glance take a stance
step ahead and make a move
outward in and inward out
never worry, find your groove
your life, this life
now life, wish life
set in motion
what a notion
this life, what life
what meaning, what feeling
it happens
quiet down and shit happens
with existence
coexistence
breathe in, out
fear not, don't pout
here it comes, there it goes
emptied bowl, down the hole
welcome to life
now go, go, go


-rdw 11/15/06

[teh-horace]

nothin'?

[DroopySnoopy]

That was awesome man.

[snowultra]

wow, that was great ----thanks

[teh-horace]

thank you guys

[sylvanlightning]

Great rhythm... a winding flow which expands from river to Ocean.

[teh-horace]

well thank you very much :)

this one just kinda came outta me

[DroopySnoopy]

Yea, I really like it, even more after reading a second time. :)

[myself]

The enumerations remind me of Walt Whitman.
And the rhythm, as someone else said before, is very good.
Also, the message - look for your own meaning in life...

[teh-horace]

well thank you very much!

i'm glad you got the meaning :)