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ConeyIslandOfTheMind
11-15-2006, 04:14 AM
A chunky stew simmering in the crockpot
Never boiling over,
Never scalding the copper
I am afraid of only one thing:
mediocrity
Middleclassmanship
And the loss of dreams to
maggots in the trashcan.
The truest thing I could say
Is that I'm only good at this
Aligning margins, Erasing ink
Two white eyes, pupilless
With lines and words running across
the middles
I could have held them in my sweaty
palms
At least the sunset still takes
My breath away
I am not in any position
To open a canned rebellion in the first place.

teh-horace
11-15-2006, 05:11 AM
sweet :thumbsup:

Orsino2
11-15-2006, 05:43 AM
Yeah. YEAH! YEAH!!!!...

That was grand. :thumbsup:

:D

DroopySnoopy
11-15-2006, 05:47 AM
Uhuh. Nice. Love stew. :D

ConeyIslandOfTheMind
11-16-2006, 02:39 AM
Love stew. :D
As do I. :D

Thanks ya'll. :) I was quite proud of it. :)

teh-horace
11-16-2006, 04:44 PM
i read it again because i can

and i think i like it twice is much now