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laughingtears
10-06-2006, 04:48 AM
Changing

Walking through different doors

A car, its door is open,

It’s an endless journey

Getting into the car

Taking a side road

My car

Chugging onwards

Barely

Barely moving

Leaving each new found haven

Moving

changing

It’s raining

Pounding on my window

Sliding down the glass

Like tears

Moving, barely,

A snail pace,

A heart is hard to come by,

And I left mine

behind.

ChristadelicFlower
10-07-2006, 06:19 AM
i like it :)

Jack Maundrell
10-09-2006, 08:00 AM
hmm... I thought to be simplictic and yet somehow enjoyable (Puff..Puff..Puff)