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ghost_of_the_river
10-04-2006, 10:58 PM
slowly sun in no moonlight blues
drippin against morning slowly swimming
to wonder to try was to feel the so shining die
think free something getting me big
remember deeper I'm getting down..lost when love don't remember
trees upside on night dream they're the lines
how weary it waves..to fade wouldn't mind
once are your will before it is right
you see the moment that drags..gotta since its trapped
too afraid? see yourself..you see me..i take out from sea
run through time..run through like I'm the bulb
find wear in memory lights cause back in time for to back it beats today

sylvanlightning
10-06-2006, 05:45 AM
Deep, great flow for me until...
'Once are your will before it is right'
perhaps this was intentional given the next
'you see the moment that drags..gotta since its trapped.'

Regardless, i found alot of power surges here and expansive ideas.

ghost_of_the_river
10-06-2006, 10:04 AM
thank you. this was my very first cut up poem. i used lyrics from about 15 different songs to get what i got. i think i might have to try this more often, i didn't realize that you could create something so spontaneous out of something that already existed. i used a random generator using sometimes a couple songs worth a lyrics at a time to get one line. from there i just kept regenerating them hundreds of times until i noticed a line that stood out and created a certain feeling or vision that could be used as part of the whole. most of it is completely random, i only changed a couple words so that it would be somewhat coherent to a reader. it probably only makes sense to me.