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clementinexo
10-01-2006, 04:43 AM
OCTOBER:

winter is coming
she can feel the chill in her bone
he is departing
"will you be back?" she asks
"i don't know"
she regrets having never expressed her feelings
she was never honest with him
his ride is coming
"i'll miss you" he says
"i'll miss you too"
she would love to go to where he is
if he would have her
"will you have me?" she whispers 10 seconds too late
10 seconds too late was always her fate

teh-horace
10-01-2006, 04:16 PM
along the lines enough :)

nice :D

a common lament amongst many of us, i'm sure

Sage Man
10-02-2006, 12:26 AM
OCTOBER:

winter is coming
she can feel the chill in her bone
he is departing
"will you be back?" she asks
"i don't know"
she regrets having never expressed her feelings
she was never honest with him
his ride is coming
"i'll miss you" he says
"i'll miss you too"
she would love to go to where he is
if he would have her
"will you have me?" she whispers 10 seconds too late
10 seconds too late was always her fateNicely written, but hopefully that won't be your fate :)

clementinexo
10-02-2006, 12:55 AM
thank you.