number 2

[teh-horace]

it's obviously reality
speaking in analogy
managing a metaphor
this is where you've been before
testing out your dreams
building schemes
releasing screams
through a field of disease
but there is a release
in the world so challenging
being a part
of what is obviously reality


-richie

[ihmurria]

oooh, I like this one a lot... nice rhythm/metre thing goin on

[teh-horace]

thank you kayleigh