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hippychrome
09-22-2006, 07:35 PM
Dreams in a rainbow,

hair blowing in the wind,

a dream being turns to show her face,

the eyes make contact with mine and a power entwines.

My heart and soul raced with excitement,
the beauty I see is like no other.

I fear to blink incase she disappears

but a whisper from her mind and soul tells me that is not so.

I blinked and our hearts met in the spiritual and astral planes,

soft gentle lips met for a single kiss and our long hair mixed...

The rainbow glows brighter.


Just something that came to me, its short I know lol.

sylvanlightning
09-23-2006, 02:47 AM
Powerful and gentle, a very bright and responsive poem that glows with togetherness.
I found it very peaceful and expansive.

hippychrome
09-23-2006, 11:26 PM
Thankyou :). Usually I do longer poetry and usually more depressing. But I think I'd like a lighter side to come out again. It just came out so I wrote it down lol.

hippychrome
02-17-2007, 11:42 PM
What happened to all my confidence?

hippie_chick666
02-18-2007, 12:20 AM
Very good work. I really enjoyed reading that poem.

Peace and love

hippychrome
02-18-2007, 12:38 AM
Thankyou :)

hippychrome
02-21-2007, 01:02 AM
I like some of your poetry too that I have read so far by the way.

hippychrome
03-03-2007, 11:40 PM
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hippychrome
05-18-2007, 05:11 AM
I miss a friend :(

myself
05-18-2007, 05:22 PM
nice poem.

hippychrome
05-21-2007, 03:33 AM
Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it mermaid :)

hippychrome
06-20-2007, 07:23 PM
1 missed, I still dream. Oh well lol. It just came to me.

Freakymetalchik
06-20-2007, 07:40 PM
fun poem =)

Gothika
06-20-2007, 08:29 PM
nice work, well done =)

hippychrome
07-06-2007, 01:26 AM
Thankyou both :)