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chandra anjali
05-13-2004, 01:19 PM
broken sunlight
tattered dreams
things aren't always what they seem.
life's abound
bridging lies
beneath the spaces where time flies

sunlight splashing
on my face
summer's warm embrace
hugging cotton
chasing dreams
things aren't always what they seem.

eccofarmer
05-13-2004, 07:57 PM
NAMASTE


Wow!!!!!!!!!!!

tourmaline
05-14-2004, 12:21 AM
sounds sorta like my poetry - good job :)

HippieFlowerGirl67
05-27-2006, 05:48 AM
Love it!

TrippinBTM
05-27-2006, 01:56 PM
Truly, this is excellent. Get thee to a publisher! ;)

Lather
05-29-2006, 12:07 AM
It's beautiful... you have a talent, make good use of it

LittleRu
05-29-2006, 08:56 PM
Lovley. Makes me feel all warm and cuddly.