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Mr. Mojo Risin'
09-21-2006, 09:42 PM
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sylvanlightning
09-22-2006, 04:24 AM
The first three stanzas are tight, the theme insightful...
I feel the close would be clearer if condensed.
severedheadstoner
09-24-2006, 03:01 AM
Excellent, IJ, excellent.