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Bhaskar
08-04-2006, 02:22 AM
The stars
have lit silken songs
in many a poet's heart,
but tonight
we could have made the watching stars blaze
with a feral music
and set the heavens dancing
and made the very sky throb with the pangs of our exquisite aching.

...but you chose to go to the beach alone.

SvgGrdnBeauty
08-04-2006, 07:46 AM
I love this in v. many ways. Fab. weaving of words, my darling. :)

Bhaskar
08-04-2006, 04:58 PM
thank you :)

rydns
08-04-2006, 06:03 PM
Wow..........thats all i can say. wow.

-thanx
-thanx
-thanx
-rydns

deep_blue_death03
08-04-2006, 09:56 PM
I love how visual this poem is. I can relate to that feeling of broken hopes.

Bhaskar
08-05-2006, 12:49 AM
Funny thing is, just an hour later, all that I had imagined happened... beautiful, gentle, starlit love.