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deep_blue_death03
08-01-2006, 04:59 AM
I wait for you, even when I know you are not coming

As if I were on a paraniod drug, I watch the window

I have never been on this side of the window

I have never been so vulnerable

Still I do try to close the blinds

Though my mind is always watching, always waiting

Always hoping your beautiful face will appear

Where are you?

myself
08-01-2006, 06:32 PM
The poem captures very nicely this feeling of expectation, hope, lack of patience, uncertainty... It's all about the irrationality of love.

gypsychildblues8
08-03-2006, 02:39 AM
thank you for that beautiful poem.
I feel like,in this moment, you have expressed what I am feeling..what I could not express..

ramadecer
08-05-2006, 12:45 PM
It makes me happy the way you express this kind of feeling...I guess it`s like when you cry cuz you`re way to happy... You know you`re weaker than you should be but all you want is to enjoy those moments... Maybe waiting in vain is not always useless...