this is my poem please tell me it's fantastic

[misterrain]

my tears and my pain and my problems
the incredible tragedy of my relationship
the unbearable emptiness that no one understands
the fact i am beautiful after he hits
i don't even feel it
i don't even know it
it doesn't exist
there is nothing

[Ganja_Goo_Ninja]

hahahaha! ..as a joke -- i think it's quite humerous. then again, my sense of humor is a tad twisted. kind of a mock-oetry. social commentary on those who need to have their ego's stroked?

either way, this poem totally changed my life. i feel more whole. more human. thanks for sharing. i'm going to go plant a garden.

[Lainey]

its fantastic
keep writing

[misterrain]

thank you so much for saying it's fantastic!!! I will keep writing!! I promise!

[Flight From Ashiya]

I like it.
It's good poetic style.
Subject -matter is a little ambiguous & stygian.

[DBG]

I really did not like that poem. However, that fact that I don't like the poem might, in fact, make the poem perfect.

[misterrain]

thank you and yes it does

[tishie_bear]

Hey man great peom. I liked it alot.

[misterrain]

seven responses! I am a genius!

to all of my fans... I promise another poem in the near future!

[hippie_chick666]

I think it's pretty good. love to hear more!

Peace and love