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[RickityRock]

Your hugs show me that you never wanna let me go
That's all I really need to know
But your kiss is so much like true love
You are my angel from above

I wish this day would always stay
So my whole world won't turn gray
I will love you forever
And you can't say never
Our love is like a piece of art
Because you will always remain in my heart.

[RickityRock]

Your hugs show me that you never wanna let me go
That's all I really need to know
But your kiss is so much like true love
You are my angel from above

I wish this day would always stay
So my whole world won't turn gray
I will love you forever
And you can't say never
Our love is like a piece of art
Because you will always remain in my heart.
yeah its pretty gay but whatever........

[TrippinBTM]

Well, I like it. It's sweet, sounds sincere, and mostly reads well. The only bad part was "and you can't say never" since it doesn't really need to be there except as a rhyme. But it doesn't say anything meaningful.