Spoiled

[JOsie]

We sat on the hill and looked out
over the roofs and into the darkness
our hands woven together like a zip
our legs entwined like snapped rope
our heads together, using each other
to support ourselves, to hold ourselves up
to hold ourselves together

The sky was full of nothing, no stars
no light, just darkness except for
the sliding dots of light on the motorway.
We watched and sat and watched
the people heading home.
I asked her where she would like to be
right now, this moment in time.

"In bed with my boyfriend."
We unzip and uncoil and unfurl ourselves
and i wish i was a dot of light.
Heading home.

[SunshineLily]

We sat on the hill and looked out
over the roofs and into the darkness
our hands woven together like a zip
our legs entwined like snapped rope
our heads together, using each other
to support ourselves, to hold ourselves up
to hold ourselves together

The sky was full of nothing, no stars
no light, just darkness except for
the sliding dots of light on the motorway.
We watched and sat and watched
the people heading home.
I asked her where she would like to be
right now, this moment in time.

"In bed with my boyfriend."
We unzip and uncoil and unfurl ourselves
and i wish i was a dot of light.
Heading home.
Ooh my Josie, that poem really touched me. And the imagery is so clever and well written. Thankyou :)
I might print it off i think...
Love,
Sunny
xxx

[Mercy]

You're an official genius.

[JOsie]

You're an official genius.
you're just saying that so you can get a cd:p

[PeopleAreStrange]

[QUOTE=JOsie]
The sky was full of nothing, no stars
no light, just darkness except for
the sliding dots of light on the motorway.
[QUOTE]

oh cool man, that part if awesome...i Love to watch the motorway at night...to see the cars going down the motorway, it looks amazing.

they really made me feel good did those three lines.

[roly]

as ever.... a josie masterpiece....thanks for sharing it with us.

roly.xxx

[borut16]

and i wish i was a dot of light.
Heading home. Great write, especially I like the way you broke it up. :)

Love,
Borut

[Mercy]

you're just saying that so you can get a cd:p
Ahem...where exactly is my CD, eh Mr???? I thought it would be waiting for me when I got back from Spain, but noooooooo... :(

[Fleassy]

hey man.

wow... u know im always a fan of your writing. I must say your style is so different to what i usually like... yet i always love what you do and this is no exception :D
U still going to come stay when im in brighton?? :D

[Brightwolf]

We sat on the hill and looked out
over the roofs and into the darkness
our hands woven together like a zip
our legs entwined like snapped rope
our heads together, using each other
to support ourselves, to hold ourselves up
to hold ourselves together

The sky was full of nothing, no stars
no light, just darkness except for
the sliding dots of light on the motorway.
We watched and sat and watched
the people heading home.
I asked her where she would like to be
right now, this moment in time.

"In bed with my boyfriend."
We unzip and uncoil and unfurl ourselves
and i wish i was a dot of light.
Heading home.

dude you didnt tell me wrote poems on the gatherings man cool wat a masterpiece man peace