Dear Adam

[mrsmorrison27]

this is a poem i wrote when my brother left me without saying goodbye. its in my book.

You're so far away
But I can still feel you
The way you left
Tore my heart into
It seems like you dont care
But I pray that you do
This abandonment
Still haunts me
I can't seem to forget the pain
And all the tears
I cried for you-
Are all in vain
Because
You're never coming home

[mrsmorrison27]

woops my mistake lol blonde moment

[lady_dreamcatcher]

wonderfully blunt and straight to the point. excellent read, this, my friend. tank you for sharing!

[indian~summer]

i like it and who cares about grammar/spelling
i've seen alot of published poems with mistakes
it doesn't matter
you should have just said it was intentional :p

[trekker]

Your poem is very touching. It is heart felt and very sweet.

[mrsmorrison27]

thank u guys. i wanted it to really express how i felt when he left, because it broke my heart. so i thought i was make kind of nieve and to the point, because thats how i felt