Big Sur (studio version) Reprise

[stalk]

I like muddy echoes.
They barely make it
'cross the river
only to be reflected
back by the forest on
the other side.
Those obese squirrels conspiring-
I LOATHE
as they chit-chat
behind my curled back
with Blue Jays,
and so many spiders.

I LOVE watching them

all

degather like some
fluttering mandala
somehow making
Sound .

O the sorcery of butterflies
trailing thru thin air
as every moment surrounds itself
with a ripple,
or an Echo.

Omar,
whatever you do-
There's an observer on the wing
of your whirlwind
strings,

Meditate on Sensory Decay ||


I wonder if I've ever thought about you


pounding on my auratic shell


I watch outside explosions of sacrament


Xenrej's Orbsycli


Forgot I had teeth
Panning for thoughts
Visions of eyes
In fire

[lady_dreamcatcher]

the second half really sped up for me. the first seems to meander along, calm and quiet, and then the second part... BOOM! wake up! and what an excellent ending, my friend! a real punch... but my favourite part, i must admit, was...

O the sorcery of butterflies
trailing thru thin air

bravo!!

[TrippinBTM]

Well, I liked the first "big sur" but this was fantastic. I like the ending a lot too, lady dreamcatcher said it all in her post. Though, I don't know who Omar is, or what Xenrej's Orbsycli means.

[stalk]

My poetry's personal,
but it's up to you to interpret it! (that's why art's so beautiful)
Thank you both for the input,
I love when others love
what I've converted.

Omar. Alfredo Rodriguez-Lopez
is one of the best guitarists alive right now. :*

[stalk]

Wow, it's funny-
I wrote the beginning when I was just high, by the river,
and later on I wrote the rest
when I was on acid,
by the same river.
and O YES
things were faster . .