ode to you

[steffan]

what game do i play now?
lonlyness and bordom
what path do i walk
alone in the dark

do you see me
miles from here
can you feel me
comming in clear?

not a fool
fumbling mad man
not a tool
tell ME who i am
!

do you see my face
think that is me
or can you trace
path of the free

[HippieFlowerGirl67]

Love it!

[lady_dreamcatcher]

good meter and rhythm. nice and concise... enjoyed very much!

[steffan]

huh, thanks, i was about to delete this too, a drunk ass top of my head poem yaknow, but i think i'll leave it now

[lady_dreamcatcher]

ha! i've actually found that some of my best stuff was produced while i was either drunk, high, or both. lol *shrug* no worries, mate.