Sometimes women kickass...

[lady_dreamcatcher]

there are some gramatical issue with this that sort of make it difficult to read, but i dig the vibe it sends! it almost sounds... unfinished. like you just stopped writing it before you got to the end. i'd love to read a bit more! and the title seems a bit harsh, just because of the mood the poem sets. overall, however, i enjoyed reading this. keep it up, and i hope to read more!

[lady_dreamcatcher]

you're right, it is unfinished... you remember reading my suicide letter?...
well think of a continuence to this one... with that vibe...
when her saving me turns into her torturing me... and you'll get what i'm goin for when I finish...

as for the gramatical things... they're put there to help ME out when I read it... it's a spoken word peace... that's why it seems hard for you to read...
ahhh! so i see! well, silly, tell me that next time! haha thanks for the explanation, man, it really brings this more into focus. blessings~

[indian~summer]

i found it easy to read
but thats prolly cause i read/write spoken work
its excellent

[indian~summer]

Thanks....
P.S. where can I read some of your stuff?...
no where online :p
at least not yet