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Butters
05-25-2006, 04:21 AM
"Three" (possible song lyrics....)


I love how you flip back your hair,
While you step on my heart
I love how you smile so dearly
As you pull me apart
I love how you brighten the room,
With the light of your lies
I love how you walk right past,
While my confidence dies
But most of all…I love how,


I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
Never walk over those who care the most
I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
I’ll never be like you,
Like you…


I love how you play the victim,
As those around you hurt
I love how you search for pity,
As you treat them like dirt
I love how you stand so tall,
While those around you shrink
I love how you look away,
While I continue to sink


But most of all…I love how,


I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
Never walk over those who care the most
I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
I’ll never be like you,

Like you…


Falling faster,
I need to escape, I need to break free
Sinking deeper,
I need to break out, yet still all I see

Is you…



I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
Never walk over those who care the most
I’ll never be like you,
Never do what you do,
I’ll never be like you,
Like you…





This is my very first attempt at writing anything really...so I know its probably really rough...

HippieFlowerGirl67
05-26-2006, 10:17 AM
That's exactly how I feel about my ex bf....

lady_dreamcatcher
05-26-2006, 03:43 PM
this would make an excellent song, my friend! very well written... you convey it all so well! good rhythm, and... well... i just really like it! hehehe tanks for sharing! great work!

Butters
05-26-2006, 03:53 PM
Hehe, thanks! This is the first thing I've ever written, so I was thinking it was bad.... http://www.hipforums.com/forums/images/smilies/tongue.gif

I just need to tinker around with my guitar to get the perfect sound for it.