Drugs, Love, and Talking

[Pinecone]

I can never tell with the things i write... what do you think?


I 've got plenty of time to be dead
that's my drugs and love and talking
but I dream a lot in bed some nights
after i burn out all the lights
I meet the people who i know and
talk like i think they understand
and then i wake up on someone's plate
more time to lose control and oooh I just can't wait
I've got nothing inside of my head
that's my drugs and love and talking
today I watched some christians sing
just all about death coming
but I had to wait there for a lady
bringing gifts and hanging round maybe
and I tell myself you always got to wait
but i gave up when she was forty minutes late
When I have nothing to say, I say it loud with my guitar
When I have nowhere to go, I go with the beat in my chest
I don't want to look like I'm somewhere to hurt someone
but I can't hold onto cares when I look dumb to everyone
fear tastes like scarecrows on my tongue
while your words fly out fine
my thoughts cower feeling safe above
circling in my mind
and sweating's not that bad to be a nobody out of eyes
and melting's not that bad to be in blankets woven from the sky
I hold my breath in cause this air's nice
In thirty seconds I fall up into the lights
I've got nothing inside of my head
that's my drugs and love and talking
every word that i hear feels useless
coming in from minds all truthless
And I think too late into night
and sure i already feel alright
but lets smoke clovers before the dawn
flip on the porchlight and put sunglasses on

[HippieFlowerGirl67]

Love it!

[lady_dreamcatcher]

i can't put my finger on just what it is about this piece, but i really really like it! you have some excellent lines in here

talk like i think they understand
and then i wake up on someone's plate

When I have nowhere to go, I go with the beat in my chest

fear tastes like scarecrows on my tongue

every word that i hear feels useless
coming in from minds all truthless

but lets smoke clovers before the dawn
flip on the porchlight and put sunglasses on


loved all of those! tee hee but i almost felt like the ending left me hanging... like i was expecting to read
that's my drugs and love and talking
again. *shrug* oh, well. that may just be me! really enjoyed this, man! tanks for sharing!