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trekker
05-22-2006, 04:17 AM
Now and Zen



Now I hear the rams horn sound between the conspicuous mountains round.

Zen I know what few have learned

Now the Earth on its axis turns, its fallen heroes and adrenaline

Zen a prophet, an old iron fence, the windmill by a tree

Zen like a knife divides us all, divides you and divides me.

Now the wolf cries boy, caught on the crook of the moon

Now is a berry on a twig

Zen hangs from a beam in a barren room

Zen begins a foil, a cripple

Now in ancient tongues pronounce your tribe

Zen I put you in my pipe while smoke does ripple

Now I need to torch it

Zen a spiritual quest for knowledge

Now some salt in the sea called porridge

Zen a place held in great esteem.

Now the wolf has never been.

trekker
05-22-2006, 06:49 PM
what a cheezy pun...
You want a cheesy pun..........

What cheese is the scariest???............Munster.....drum roll please......

trekker
05-23-2006, 04:45 AM
Quack Quack

sylvanlightning
05-23-2006, 04:42 PM
I enjoyed many of the abstract images,
yet felt fewer words would have
sharpened each concept or perspective.

Duck
05-23-2006, 04:49 PM
I actually liked the cheesy pun :D
however, didn't like the "poem" as you call it