so sorry

[moonlight phoenix]

So sorry for having the time
to see you, to breathe you, to grieve you
So sorry for having the time
to hate you, like you, love you
So sorry for having the time
to feel you, be you, dream you
So sorry for having
fallen so deep in love
with someone who doesn't have the time
to feel me, see me, dream me
So sorry I just can't stop
having the time
to make rainbows out of clouds for you.

[dietcoketree]

i love this poem. very beautiful- and im feeling the SAME. pm me if you wanna talk :)

[TrippinBTM]

Hey, that's really good. I like the repetition and how it wraps back on itself at the end. :)

[chime]

that was awesome. i've certainly felt that way about someone before and can imagine myself in the headspace that created that poem's energy. thanks.

[osiris]

The ever-twisting current of Love and Hate;
The Karmic Contingency of Oblivious Fate.

Practice using both hands, both sides of the brain,
The Scourge for Pleasure and the Crook for Pain.

And practice switching their applications, for Aught;
That you may comprehend how the Two equal Nought.

AUMGN, AMEN & AGAPE

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[Bunbury]

That's really nice, Moonlight Phoenix. :) I know how that feels. You've handled it really well. Nice one.