Off the top of my head

[Daniel Herring]

Off the top of my head,
A thing did fall,
A tiny voice so sweet and small,
It spoke to no one, spoke to all,
A whisper, a warning, a clarion call.

[TrippinBTM]

Well, it's a start. lol

I mean, you could really develop this more, sounds more like the beginning of something.

Still, I like it.

[stalk]

quatrains are fun :)
http://forums.hypography.com/lounge/1851-quatrain-corner-169.html

[Daniel Herring]

Thanks TBTM, it was only an exercise in spontaneity: literally 'off the top of my head'; accomplished in under five minutes (I write slowly). Glad you liked it. By all means, if you think it deserves it, add something - or, just rip off one of your own.

:)

Thanks Stalk, I looked at the site but didn't get much out of it. Do you mean quatrains as in Nostradamus?