Your Voice

[dietcoketree]

Your voice

I’ve not heard in a while

How are you doing

What are you thinking

Are you happy?

Do you ever just smile?

You’d never believe the beauty in the stars

Until you gazed into them as I do



Crazy boy don’t you believe in love?

Don’t you believe in we’re meant to be?

Lover please don’t go far

I miss you

[stalk]

Honestly,
I don't think that poem could be published.
I mean, it can,
but you should really really
just read as much Poetry as you can.
Get a feel for what's been done,
so that you can experiment,
and do better!

Progression is really the key, here.
Always reading,
always learning,
always writing.
You will progress
no matter what
if you just want to.
You're 16 years old,
you've got so much time, babe.

Just keep learning,
think about publishing later.

[sylvanlightning]

You’d never believe the beauty in the stars

Until you gazed into them as I do


Gazing into anothers eyes,
we find a new Universe.