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[Aditi]

We are finding our way

Back to each other
And He knew we never left
For long or short
To run around a little
In the new grass
And listen to the Spirit
With our new sense

It is a story
We never stopped writing
And we laugh fondly
Wondering when we began
The fine lines
Feed the needle's head
Gentle coaxing to gentle freedom
Yes, death is our friend and partner
We are finding our way



[I-I love you I-I do
The way you help me to remember
By remembering One you remember all
I laugh and cry at my blindness
and oh the irony]

[mebesideme]

Remembering

That would be an awesome title. I like it a lot. Is it a song?

[Aditi]

greetings mebesideme (lovely name ;)
i don't think it is a song, more like something i would say to some very old friends when i saw them again after being gone from them for a while

remembering would be okay
often reluctant to add a title onto things - finding i usually choose one that narrows the experience from its original magnitude
thanks for sharing love :)

[VanAstral]

The last stanza is amazing! You have a sweet voice.

[SunFree]

Wow, i love it; especially the middle stanza.