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spinelli
07-13-2004, 02:38 PM
I wrote this carelessly the other night and I just read it again and I love it
I can't stop reading it!

Our Love
Forever in my soul
our love continues,
lives and works
for all that is
Your eyes, your smile
fuel the eternal flame
of adore
of content
of love

You gave me strength
you give me faith
you gave me hope
you showed me myself
you gave directions to a lost heart
You did and still guide me
towards the light
through your light

I thankyou
I thankyou for your support,
your strength
your weakness which gives me strength,
your lessons which cause me pain,
your pain which teach me lessons

Your love which is my Love
Our love

Moonjava
07-14-2004, 04:06 AM
*Bravo* I'm feeling the love :)
<3 Moonjava

mebesideme
07-14-2004, 06:17 AM
That was VERY beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it, and will be saving it to my faves for later rereadings.

MarkN
07-25-2004, 06:52 PM
excellant spin!:)

lucyinthesky
07-25-2004, 08:10 PM
I wrote this carelessly the other night and I just read it again and I love it
I can't stop reading it!

i love when that happens. makes me so proud of my own writing :)

Lunatic_Fireball
07-25-2004, 10:44 PM
2 Thumbs up for this...very very nice.

fizzy_elf
07-26-2004, 03:05 PM
your lessons which cause me pain,
your pain which teach me lessons


very niiiiice :D