tell me how to feel...

[JOsie]

this is a poem i wrote and then adapted slightly to make it into a song...

hope you enjoy it:)

Getting carried away with myself
On a sea of insincere sympathy
but it's too late to retract

Crossing out the words
That are meaningless right now
I find out what has been holding me back

wake up pouring with sweat
another dream about a nightmare
one of many stupid mistakes i have made

underlining the words
that mean something to me now
try to learn from my regrets

And it's you, it's all for you
every second hand emotion
This is how my heroes tell me how to feel

When i'm stuck for a memory to inspire me
i think back to a time when i said something i never should have said

[sweetdreadlover]

great word usage...have you ever tried putting one point with another until they make a short story of some sort?....i think it would turn out awesome :)

[roly]

yay- u posted it!
it's sure been a while...
:)
yay josie...yay
i love this...its really beautiful...

roly.xxx

[JOsie]

great word usage...have you ever tried putting one point with another until they make a short story of some sort?....i think it would turn out awesome :)
thats how i write poems usually...i just write pages and pages until it comes to an ending...and then just cut out all the rubbish bits...:p