...wake me...

[sweetdreadlover]

As I wake I hear the phone ring
i roll over to answer
my morning has begun
i shower in the warm mist of life and sit before a corparate life of filth
consumer driven and the hatred of the world beaten into my mind
the only escape
the only freedom
my own demain
the place in which i strive
the home where i call my own world
the peaceful existance before my eyes
trying to tie down our lives
making money for uncle sam
who the hell is uncle sam??
he is no uncle of mine
war and deficincy creep into my head
walking through town its before me
with every notion of fear
where am i?
what is this place?
why can't i seem to sleep...wake me from this nightmare...

[mebesideme]

Wow.....I love that. I feel the same away about my life. I love reading my thoughts coming from another hand.

[inbloom]

i like your writing. it's alot more interesting than alot of the stuff i read, these days. good on you. :)

[kahlil]

I really enjoy your style in writing it is very gripping, it takes you from your seat and returns you a little dizzy, heart beating furiously, and very very afraid, it's like you have a little conversation interrogation style with your audience, i like the casualness of the narrator at the same time i enjoy the way your work makes a person question the quality of their life, that is a very essential quality in good poetry after you set a poem down you find yourself reading it again because your not so sure your brain could handle all that truths in so many lines, please keep writing you're talented!

[sweetdreadlover]

Thank you....that means so much coming from you guys....i appreciate every word you each said..it made my day:)

BrEe