buzzed on another

[dc-vision]

I am
your witness
at your peripheral
vision
I am
buzzed on you
absorbed with you

intimate
without the walls
silent
watching the dance
of your being

this is love to me
this is ecstasy
being buzzed on you
in an eternal moment
of witnessing

the delicacy
of your movements
the in breath
the furrowed brow
the hair fall
the inward lean

absorbed in you
absorbed in whatever
you are doing
whether it be writing
or daydreaming
I am buzzed on you
until the spell is broken

when you feel me
feeling you
and turn
to look at me
and ask
"what?"


©2003 DC Vision

[sweetdreadlover]

the only problem with it in my eyes are the words are slightly muddled...what you are trying to say is absolutely beautiful...but try making sure the words make 100% sense if you want it to be understood :)