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soulrebel51
07-10-2004, 01:20 AM
I havent wrote any thing in over a month, maybe two I dont remember. I havent had the heart too, but this morning I picked up a pen and put it to the paper and the words just came. Tell me what you think, I call it "Please"

Kill me now
Ah, the pain is too much
To end it now would be so sweet
You ask me why, but the answer is obvious

Kill the pain please,
Even if it is the end for me
Stop it now,
T'would be so nice of you
Now is the time,
Everyday is agonizing
Ready? I am.

Purple_Burnt_Squirre
07-10-2004, 09:01 AM
I really like this it seems to me to mean so much like to me it could be about someone depressed, a terminly ill person or just someone whos having a bad day I think cause its short doesn't go into pacifics I found I had to read it a few times and think about it which is cool

soulrebel51
07-10-2004, 01:36 PM
thank you, but actually it is about killing the pain that someone left me. and me too was confused after I wrote it