body language

[dc-vision]

I am the voyeur
of the witnessing
the way your fingertips
glide over glistening skin
in nervous glances my way
and unconscious body language

I know love does not come easy
to a small town boy like you
and this tension of being so close
to what your body needs
is making me delirious
with a longing equal to yours

oh the slow vibrational drag
as magnetism makes
rational thought a task
I am wandering like your fingers
over that able body landscape
and salty droplets of summer haze

I know love does not come easy
to a small town boy like you
and I am watching this opportunity
building in tensile sensuality
we may not make aching contact today
but there are tomorrows in waiting

©2003 DC Vision

[KittenX]

The ending was a bit of a let down....too abrupt for me, doesn't feel like a proper closure.
Also the lack of any punctuation brings things down too.

Over all good imagery, not the most fascinating but keeps the interest going.

"©2003 DC Vision "

Darn, so that means I can't print this and sell it to my friends? ;)