Nazi's List

[borut16]

Name/Process/To be killed/Party/Country/Jew

1.) Janko Kendezky/fighting/yes/communist/Poland/Yes
2.) Magda Kendezky/feeding kids/yes/unknown/Poland/Yes

/…/

999,999,999.) Love Peace/destroying nazism/as soon as possible/unknown/World/unknown

And they couldn't destroy Love.

Love conquered nazism.
It shall continue destroying other forms of hate.

[KittenX]

Uniquely mature.

[borut16]

Thanks! :)

I tried to make it unique, because I like to try new styles out, and I just got the idea in my head, so it was quite random for me to write it.

I'm flattered You replied like that. :)

[KittenX]

That's a promising sign of a good poet. Knowing what you want to write about, having an idea and then trying to express it in a unique way is a sure way for writing an interesting poem.

Although now I have to say that last line..."children of hate" is a contradictory combination. Children has a positive connotation while hate obviously has a negative one. I personally think you should rephrase that.
And also maybe instead of saying "Love destroyed nazism."
Say..."Love conquered/destroyed hate"
These are just suggestions though, take them as you will.

[borut16]

That's a promising sign of a good poet. Knowing what you want to write about, having an idea and then trying to express it in a unique way is a sure way for writing an interesting poem.

Although now I have to say that last line..."children of hate" is a contradictory combination. Children has a positive connotation while hate obviously has a negative one. I personally think you should rephrase that.
And also maybe instead of saying "Love destroyed nazism."
Say..."Love conquered/destroyed hate"
These are just suggestions though, take them as you will. Thanks a lot.

I had a feeling like love and destroying don't go too well together, but I didn't have any better ideas.

And children, I should rephrase that, too, didn't even think about it. :)

Thanks for you comment,
Borut