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[marcella312001]

So close, so gloriously close to the eternal rapture of the human spirit.
I stand so close so gloriously close it seems but a dream that such a spark could exist on so desolate a plain.
It seems a wonder to behold the eternal hunger, joy, pain that we call life,the eternal soul concealed so neatly within the human frame.

[marcella312001]

Ok fine I understand no one likes this one fine

[KittenX]

Ok fine I understand no one likes this one fine
Huh? :confused:

[marcella312001]

just checking if everyones key boards were broke.
There used to be a lot of cool people on this sight
that would post a reply to tell people if they enjoyed a
poem or not but I guess they all went somewhere else.

[KittenX]

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[sylvanlightning]

So close,
so gloriously close,
to the eternal rapture of the human spirit.

It seems but a dream,
that such a spark could exist,
on so desolate a plain.

It seems a wonder
to behold the eternal hunger, joy & pain,
that we call life,
concealed so neatly within the human frame.

Just a child filled with awe in the woods,
lost in the vast aloneness,
seeking attention and joy.