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LSDPsychonaut
03-19-2006, 05:23 PM
a noose and a life
in death's embrace it subsides
insignificant
Smelly Socks
03-21-2006, 02:03 AM
Suicide is always a topic of poetry I can relate to. Very nice work. Haiku is a great form of poetry. It catches your eye right away and isn't so long that you get bored of it.

I liked it very much.
LSDPsychonaut
03-21-2006, 05:39 AM
Suicide is always a topic of poetry I can relate to. Very nice work. Haiku is a great form of poetry. It catches your eye right away and isn't so long that you get bored of it.

I liked it very much.
Thanks :) .
Smelly Socks
03-21-2006, 06:18 AM
No problem. Just giving props to good work.