The Quest For Eternal Purity

[Davino]

The Quest For Eternal Purity
is written in the droplets of the rain
that wanders down my window screen
and tells me stories of the times that have been
that makes me wander upon, this land
seeing all the promises, that the lord commands


seeing all the spirits that tell me how to roll
grippin' the wheel aside me, to and fro
grippin' my heart another mile skewed, glancin' at the boarder of the promised land.

[TrippinBTM]

I really liked the first part (though there's some commas towards the end you could do without), but the second part doesn't seem to fit in with it; it has a different feel to it. Not that either part is bad, they just don't seem to go together.

[Davino]

Thanks, I spliced it together a bit.