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ripple23
03-16-2006, 10:03 PM
The sun that sinks between us has given
you a new name.
We who alone know the total flood of a life
that assaults with its secrets.

Those curtains that assail you
at the balcony of your tempered dreams
give way almost nightly
to the retreating winds caught in your hair

and I saw amidst your falling soul
the ocean, that kept me with its confidence.
For what wonders it has drunk,
the sea will keep you company.

Icurus
03-18-2006, 10:21 PM
This was a very good read,
only if felt a bit waned, in the end, as in like a rollor
coster ride, it failed me in a last second before the end
complete roll before stopping.....
if you catch my drift...
all and all a good piece,
Thanks,
Devon Knight ~