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marquis_de_odde
03-16-2006, 04:31 AM
Sitting on a particularily uncomfortable stool
Reading poems far beyond my own words
In a mix of envy and awe
I flick a stray fingernail onto the floor
Stare for a moment at my burning cigarette
Fascinating fear strikes me
Smoke rings frame my face
What is the proper conclusion
In the debate of wasting time?

TrippinBTM
03-16-2006, 03:35 PM
"It's my time and I can waste it if I want to" and "Sitting quietly by yourself IS doing something"

I liked your poem :)