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shaina
03-13-2006, 02:45 AM
being yourself

is harder

in a world

where nothing

is ever the same,

sometimes I wonder

would you remember me

cause, life consumes

us into oblivion

a wave of sudden

pulses through a

sea of green algae

on the back of an

eagle soaring

towards

a new age, a new vision

once more.

shaina
03-14-2006, 08:25 AM
people post way to much poetry in this thread so nothing seems to get read

fylthevoyd
03-14-2006, 01:35 PM
nice work shaina

and yes you are right ...it does get alot of posts and people's work gets cycled through much too quick

osiris
03-15-2006, 08:01 PM
Nothing is ever the same, indeed; consuming and begetting.

TrippinBTM
03-16-2006, 03:27 PM
I like the end, the idea of flying on an eagle to a new vision. Nice stuff