A Winter's Night

[weaselpop]

Your body shivers and sweats
To the big mess sound, sirens
And sighs, all in the sweltering
Grey slush of second hand snow.

[sylvanlightning]

Sweet, i liked your imagery;
you painted quite a landscape,
drawing in the viewer
and stimulating the senses.

[weaselpop]

Thanks... I was trying to portray the half confused state when you're trying to get asleep, but you can't and you're too aware of the things around you.

...I like the way you laid out your response like a poem :p