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TheLizardKingMike
02-05-2006, 05:05 AM
Shattered
The crystal night
Of broken glass
Attic refugees

Storm-troopers and lightning men
Cattle drivers
Star of David
In a pen

Burning flesh
Charred bodies
Agony
The madman’s haven
Auschwitz

sylvanlightning
02-05-2006, 06:29 AM
The darkness,
of ignorance and suffering,
draws many to see an inward light...
in hopes of non-violent universal peace.

Bright Blessings & good work.

GirlInTheGreenGrass
02-05-2006, 07:34 PM
description allows us the vision to see a poem. You nailed that. I enjoyed this.
"Attic Refugees"
"Star of David
In a pen"
Awesome.
Keep writing!

Peace& <3

TheLizardKingMike
02-06-2006, 12:04 AM
Thanks alot. It may not be pretty, but is true. I thought it was pretty good too.