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TheLizardKingMike
02-03-2006, 05:22 AM
One in a million
A drop in a green ocean
A grain of sand in an orange desert
Empty faces
Nothing at all
It’s just a brick
In the wall
Division

Assimilation
No identity
Or personality
The establishment’s wet dream

Force-fed knowledge
Propaganda
Eliminating free thought
And art
Human flocks of sheep
Blind eyes
Spirits now meek

Do not give in
Fight for freedom
For all you love
If you want to remain
Alive inside

sylvanlightning
02-08-2006, 03:11 PM
A conscious drop is the ocean,
A conscious grain is the desert,
A conscious star is the jeweled sky &

A conscious human is....

GirlInTheGreenGrass
02-08-2006, 05:33 PM
....free to fight for love.

This is my favorite poem of yours so far. I wish I had a guitar so I could set it to music. Then again, I wish I could play the guitar. :) 5 stars from me! Keep on being inspired, friend. You're good at it.

peace&<3

TheLizardKingMike
02-08-2006, 05:48 PM
Thanks alot guys, this one is ok, I had a vivid message. But I don't think I conveyed it like I wanted to. This one could have been better, but it is what it is. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply to my poems. I really do appriciate it.