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LostOne
02-02-2006, 07:23 PM
I onced laughed at heartbroken men,
Pouring their sorrow into songs and words,
Only one with an unscathed heart could scoff at such pain
Now I know,
The unbearably, icy cold blade of withering emotions
Slides between my armor, my protection.
Sickly sweet memories flooding my conciouss at unwanted times,
The liitle pieces of memerobilia found lying around in obscure places,
The constant, fucking, questions.
And yet I still remain hopeful only to be crushed repeatedly beneath the waves
of her indifference.




Fuck Love

GirlInTheGreenGrass
02-02-2006, 07:44 PM
"And yet I still remain hopeful only to be crushed repeatedly beneath the waves
of her indifference."

The whole poem spoke simply to me. I'm empathetic about all of this. :) Keep writing, and keep sharing. I like the way you flow
peace&<3

Icurus
02-02-2006, 08:26 PM
Yes!, and enivitable cold reality unfortunately,
well written, with a nice flow, an understanding from
start, to finish....

I good read,
Devon Knight / Icurus

Hippygurl2005
02-28-2006, 03:44 AM
i'm not sure what u are describing in that poen lostone, but i like it, very deep..