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GirlInTheGreenGrass
02-02-2006, 06:53 PM
Streched out in the tall grass, I make
shapes out of the clouds.
I can hear the wind whistle as if to let me
know it likes my presence here.
It sways a nearby willow tree in the most
delecate way, so that I can't look away
from the innocence, the freedom of it...
the deepness of understanding.
The essence of nature perfumes the air,
keeping me in a calm, serene state.
The birds sing the most beautiful song I've
ever heard, the song to my heart.
I stand up to dance, raise my hands to the
sky... for the beauty of the silence.

LostOne
02-02-2006, 09:02 PM
I rally dig this poem, it literally gave me a shiver when i was done. And I love any art form that affects me

sylvanlightning
02-03-2006, 06:04 AM
Yum, yes.

DreamChaser
02-03-2006, 08:37 AM
GirlInTheGreenGrass, I wrote a poem to compliment your poem;

Summer enlightened me
My hometown blew me away
Every leaf is amazing
and blades of grass Wow
There's never been peace like Right Now
The fire in the wind is blazing
If I could stay I'd stay
And still wish you could see

Hope you enjoy it, yours made me reminisce of beautiful days.

GirlInTheGreenGrass
02-04-2006, 11:54 PM
I'm flattered that I inspired you DreamChaser. Your poem was stellar. Thank you.
And hey, you can stay, they'll see;)

Thanks all of you... Sylvan, you must be hungry. :)
peace&<3 friends

sylvanlightning
02-05-2006, 04:12 AM
The essence of nature perfumes the air,


The perfume of life is amazing,
often i just lose myself.

fulmah
02-06-2006, 06:37 PM
Excellent poem, perfectly serene... I enjoyed much :)